January 18, 2018 · 6:00 pm
Michael Claudius the 3rd was an interesting character to develop. I knew while designing Martin Ryker that Claudius was the villain Ryker wanted to take down. The problem was that Ryker himself isn’t exactly the “good guy” of this story. I knew he was pretentious (he makes sure everyone knows he’s from old money with the whole “the 3rd”), but that was about it. Then on Saturday, Shaun showed me this picture he’d created:
Michael Claudius the 3rd designed by Shaun Ellithorpe
Yeah, that definitely doesn’t look like a good guy.
I wanted Claudius to have the first name “Michael” because it is supposed to mean “Who is like God?” I took that literally in the sense that he is very full of himself. His last name changed a few times, starting out as Costas, or Costel, changing to Constantine, and finally settling with Claudius. The three previous names all mean “constant” or “steadfast;” I was initially thinking of using “constant” in the slogan for his company. But somewhere along the way his name changed to Claudius (I believe that was at Shaun’s suggestion, but I can’t remember now).
Claudius Capital was an interesting thing to name as well (and I can’t take final credit for it – that was Shaun’s suggestion as well). I had to look up investment companies to see how they are named first. A lot of companies have a form of “invest,” “trading,” or “brokers” in their names. So I was going to name his company “<his name> Investments.” But then Shaun suggested Claudius Capital, which has a nice ring to it.
Claudius Capital banner designed by Shaun Ellithorpe
I didn’t worry too much about Claudius until Sunday, when we decided to make a trailer for the game, and later the Twitter page (we came up with the Claudius Capital slogan while making his Twitter page – I’m still not sure who in their right mind would actually invest with his company with that slogan!) As I mentioned the other day, we used his Twitter account to justify some design decisions/lack of functionality for the demo. I didn’t pay too much attention to voice, other than letting him make ridiculous and over the top pronouncements using hashtags. He also has no dialogue, so I didn’t have to worry at all about his voice in the game.
All in all, Claudius was a fantastic collaboration. He wouldn’t be who he is today without the help of my team (esp Shaun)!
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January 17, 2018 · 6:00 pm
During the NGDC, we knew we were making a guy who was a “trader by day, ninja by night.” But it was up to me to flesh this guy out. So the first thing I did was come up with his name.
Martin Ryker designed by Shaun Ellithorpe
To come up with his name, I went looking for names that meant things like “swift,” thinking he’s supposed to be a ninja. I settled on Ryker, which means “fast” or “strider,” and Martin, which is derived from Martis, which is rooted in Mars, the god of war. I thought it was a fitting name because Martin is waging his own war against Claudius Capital.
Once I had his name, I had to start thinking about Martin’s backstory. For this, I mainly started asking myself questions like “what’s his job?” “How did he end up working at his company?” “What company does he work at?” “Why is he framing the other company for insider trading?”
Working through these questions, I named the two companies (which is also how Michael Claudius from Claudius Capital came into being). I also had to figure out why Martin was a trader rather than a ninja (the whole team agreed that being a ninja would be the first choice here). It was a little before we were packing up at the library on Friday night that I solidified his backstory: the other company had bankrupt him, and he was looking for revenge.
Since the NGDC was only 48 hours (and everyone lost a few hours due to technical difficulties), I was extremely grateful that I managed to have Martin’s backstory figured out all within the first night.
So on Saturday I worked on his dialogue a bit. While I had his backstory, I had a bit of a hard time nailing a voice for him. In the end I tried to go for more of the more “strong silent type” of character within the game. I kept his dialogue short and snappy (you can see a few lines at the beginning of the demo, when his assistant Pearl is telling him what to do – he has very short replies).
I later had to write dialogue for the trailer. Since Martin is the one talking through the entire thing, I had a harder time keeping with the whole “strong silent type.” Overall I thought his dialogue was alright. If/when Hostile Takeover is made into a longer game, I’ll take another stab at nailing his voice down.
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